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It is said that people’s life now is becoming more and more stressful. What are the causes and how to solve it?

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In todays competitive world people are suffering from various stresses
comapred
examine and note the similarities or differences of
compared
 to olden days.
This
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 essay discusses some of the problems that cause
stress
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 and suggest some solutions to address them. One of the main
stress
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genarator
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generators
generator
 of
modern human
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modern humans
the modern human
 is due to the pressure from
work
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.
This
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 is because most of the private sectors put pressure on employees by giving time limits for each project. For
eaxmple
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
examples
, people
work
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 in software companies has to do overtime to finish their requirements. Along with
this
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workers
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worker
 has to perform well as
competetion
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
competitions
computation
 is very tight in
this
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 world. So people
has
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have
are having
 to prove themselves that they are eligible and
skillful
having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
skilful
 enough to carry on a job.
Cosequently
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Consequently
, that
produce
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produces
stress
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 on them and would not be able to concentrate on their
work
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.To avoid
this
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 issue employees should develop an awareness about time management and draw some plans and stick
on
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at
with
to
 it until they finish their job. Another problem that
make
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makes
stress
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 on people is bills that cost lots of money.
This
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 is due to the fact that these days people
has
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have
 to pay lots of money for power, water,
house hold
a social unit living together
household
 items and other living needs.
For instance
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, studies show that most of the medium families are struggling to lead a better life because of expensive bills.
As a result
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,
peolpe
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 become concerned about their life and that will produce
stress
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 on them.
However
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, if governments should take right action like reduce the bill for electricity and other daily needs would help to avoid
this
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stress
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. In conclusion,
work
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 load and expensive bills are
tha
definite article
the
two
three
 main reasons
stress
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 in today's generation.
However
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, time management and
govenemnet
Suggestion
 actions to decrease bill amounts can be
immence
unusually great in size or amount or degree or especially extent or scope
immense
 help to reduce pressure on young people. T

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