The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.
This
bar chart illustrates information about the
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of British inhabitants spending wealth on charity by age group between the year 1990 till 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that donation money was significantly popular
in
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the younger age in the
1990's
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and decreased
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the seniors.
In contrast
, the charity rate in 2010 was lower in the younger generation and showed a steady increase
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the elderly. In 1990, the percentage started
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17% with the age between 18 and 25. From here, it rose
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to a peak of more than 40%,
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the group between 36-50 years old.
Finally
, the numbers showed a gradual decrease to 32%, with about 3% less than in 2010. In 2010, adolescents between 18 and 25 started with 6%.
This
gently went up to nearly 40% in 51-65,
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exceeding the numbers in 1990.
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the end,
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the category over 65 accounted for 35% in 2010.
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