The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.
This
bar chart illustrates information about the amount
of British inhabitants spending wealth on charity by age group between the year 1990 till 2010.
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Overall
, it can be seen that donation money was significantly popular in
the younger age in the Change preposition
among
1990's
and decreased Fix apostrophe usage
1990s
by
the seniors. Change preposition
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In contrast
, the charity rate in 2010 was lower in the younger generation and showed a steady increase by
the elderly.
In 1990, the percentage started Change preposition
in
with
17% with the age between 18 and 25. From here, it rose Change preposition
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up
to a peak of more than 40%, Change preposition
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by
the group between 36-50 years old. Change preposition
for
Finally
, the numbers showed a gradual decrease to 32%, with about 3% less than in 2010.
In 2010, adolescents between 18 and 25 started with 6%. This
gently went up to nearly 40% in 51-65, with
exceeding the numbers in 1990. Change preposition
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the end, Change the preposition
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the category over 65 accounted for 35% in 2010.Change preposition
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