Some people think that the Internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are becoming more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Although
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it is sometimes thought that people has become
muchal
(Old Testament) the guardian archangel of the Jews
Michael
closer to each other with the advent of
internet
Suggestion
the internet
, other individuals believe that people are getting more and more separated and lonely. In my opinion, I considered that Internet has made is detached from the
society
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and real life. On the one hand, it
is often believe
Suggestion
is often believed
that
Internet
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the Internet
helps people become connected to one another. It is very easy and cheap to keep in touch with people any time that we need.
Firma
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example, those people who are living in remote areas,
such
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as villages far from urban places, are able to get familiar with recent developments and stay in touch with their relatives or friends living in cities.
Furthermore
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, with the help of Internet education is available for
every one
all people
everyone
.
In other words
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, people have the opportunity to get quality distance education despite the fact that they live in distant places.
Moreover
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, the disabled got isolated from the
society
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and had
few people
Suggestion
a few people
to talk to before the advent of
Internet
Suggestion
the Internet
. Now,
their
in or at that place
there
is any boundaries
firma
marked by firm determination or resolution; not shakable
firm
format
formed
them to get involved in the
society
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and they can feel themselves a
partiya
something determined in relation to something that includes it
portion
of community
bu
Used in specifying adjacent dimensions
by
communicating with people via
Internet
Suggestion
the Internet
.
On the other hand
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, according to some, people have been getting more and more isolated from each other since the Internet was invented and In
agree
Suggestion
agreeing
.
In other words
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, people are becoming depended in their social network to get on well with anyone they need, which lack of face to face communication.
For instance
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, nowadays, hardly ever do people find
time
Suggestion
the time
to visit their parents or friends,
instead
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they prefer to ask after them by just texting on their social accounts.
This
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, undeniably, leads to us being reluctant to speak to the people around us and ignorant to other people's problems as people have very few live conversations and cannot feel
inner voice
Suggestion
the inner voice
of individuals.
Besides
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, people are becoming more and more
agressive
having or showing determination and energetic pursuit of your ends
aggressive
since the Internet fills our brain with
plethora
Suggestion
a plethora
the plethora
of unnecessary information. As a consequence, people develop ignorance and make themselves and others feel isolated by not paying attention closely. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I think that
Internet
Suggestion
the Internet
made us less sociable, which causes disconnection to each other and to the
society
Use synonyms
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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