Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools, others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent decades, the question of whether or not it is more beneficial to send students to single-sex schools have received a great deal of public attention.
Although
this
choice appears attractive, the disadvantages will be far more significant. On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why some think that students should study in single-gender schools.
First
, because boys and girls have different learning needs, it is better for them to be taught separately. In fact, single-sex schools offer teaching styles, subject choices and learning programmes that are entirely focused on either boys or girls, which would help each individual pursue their strengths and passions.
Second
, by enrolling in the same-sex schools, students will have less chance for early relationships. Without worrying about these distractions, they might be able to concentrate more on their studies, and
therefore
, might get higher academic results than those at co-ed schools.
On the other hand
, I would argue that it would be better for students to enter mixed-gender education.
Firstly
, in order to raise students’ gender awareness, it is really necessary to teach them in co-ed schools.
For example
, male and female students are given the chance to explore each other's perspective, their similarities and differences, which leads to better knowledge about co-existence and gender equality in students.
Secondly
, if students participate in mixed-classes, they will have the opportunity to interact and take part in group work activities with opposite-sex classmates.
This
may help them learn a wide range of skills
such
as communication or teamwork which are necessary for their future jobs. In conclusion,
although
some people think that students should be sent to single-sex schools, I personally believe that mixed-gender education brings more benefits for students.
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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