You have seen advertisement in an australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your latter Explain why you would like the job Give details of why would be a suitable person to employ Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in the six-month child babysitting job advertised in an Australian magazine. I believe my past experiences make me well-suited for the position, and I want to emphasize that I can add value to your children, particularly in the areas of preschool education and communication. For the past five years, I have gained diverse babysitting experiences in various countries. Throughout
this
period, I have had the opportunity to understand different cultures and analyze significant education models. My background as a primary school teacher
further
provides me with a valuable advantage.
Additionally
, I have written numerous articles about new education models and effective ways to impart new information to children.
In addition
to
this
, I gained babysitting experience in New Zealand two years ago. During that period, I visited our country and made many wonderful friends.
As a result
, I believe I will easily adapt to the daily culture and enjoy my time with existing friends. I anticipate having enjoyable moments with your children and fostering positive relationships with each other.
While
I await your positive feedback, I would be grateful if you could reply to my email as soon as possible. I will be waiting to hear from you. If you have any questions or thoughts, please do not hesitate to contact me. Kind regards, Salih Zeki
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Coherence & Cohesion
Present a clear logical order with an appropriate introduction and closing statement. Ensure that each paragraph explores a separate main idea relevant to the task prompt.
Task Achievement
Complete the task by fully addressing all parts of the prompt in a well-organized manner. Maintain a suitable formal tone throughout the letter.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural exchange
  • Childcare
  • Adaptability
  • Nurturing
  • Pedagogical skills
  • Recreational activities
  • Domestic duties
  • First Aid certified
  • Homework assistance
  • Explore
  • Local customs
  • Interpersonal skills
  • Proactive
  • Enthusiastic
  • Responsible
  • CPR trained
  • Language acquisition
  • Sightseeing
  • Aussie lifestyle
  • Immerse
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