(2024) You are currently doing a diploma course at a college, but you need to take a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In your letter, give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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break from the diploma program. I am Jojo, and currently enrolled in a software diploma, which has a duration of 3 years. As of 25th March, I will be starting my 6th semester before I complete my internship term.

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I did not have a great experience

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working in the field, I could not say the same for the in-class activities and classes. Before starting my new term, I would like to take a leave of seven age. As I did not show my parents since I started

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program, I would like to visit them. My parents live in India and the flight takes 13 hours to go from India to Canada.

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, I would have 5 days or less to spend with my family.

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, I would use 3 days to go to the temple so I can get blessings from the god. For the remaining days, I will try to spend it in a resort with my loved ones. I would really appreciate it if you give me approval upon my request, which can give me a chance to reunite with my family. Yours sincerely, Jojo

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Consider adding a subject line to clarify the purpose of your letter.

coherence and cohesion

Try to develop more of your ideas in each paragraph to support your request better.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure to proofread for any spelling errors such as 'age' instead of 'leave'.

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You clearly explained the purpose of your letter and the reason for your leave.

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Your tone is polite and respectful throughout the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

204 words

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Some people seek a lot of advice from family and friends when choosing their career. Others feel it is better to choose a career more independently. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Music plays a vital role in our country. How much has music influenced the way we think today? What do you think is the key role of music in today's world?

Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe that it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In some countries there are more yung people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?