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There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?

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The system of
nuclear family
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the nuclear family
a nuclear family
 is being popular rather joint family nowadays. There are pros and cons of living small family.
This
eassy
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
issue
 will examine both these sides. On the one hand, the main advantage of having nuclear family is  it will be easy to maintain
mutal
common to or shared by two or more parties
mutual
marital
 harmony among members of the family. As there
is
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are
less family
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fewer family
least family
 members, one can establish cordial with another. To illustrate, family having more than 10 members can have
chance
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a chance
the chance
 of disintegration as it will very difficult for head of the family to talk with each and everyone and maintain equidistant with all.
Inaddition
Suggestion
In addition
, the basic needs of the children can be easily
fulfill
completed to perfection
fulfilled
 due to the reason that parents will not have much financial burden
comapre
examine and note the similarities or differences of
compare
 to the joint family.
Hence
, small family can be a happy family in
this
 modern era where one person cost of living is so much
high
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higher
 comparing few decades back.
On the other hand
, the disadvantages of nuclear family can not be neglected. The children will be deprived of social and emotional support as parents are busy
in
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with
 their own personal chores.
As a result
, children can jump into the negative habit of
drugs
Suggestion
drug
 addiction and other socially immoral activities.
furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
, children of small family will not learn social values, norms and traditions because there
is
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are
 no grandparents in
small family
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small families
a small family
.
consequently
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Consequently
, the children can't able to be
the good
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better
 citizens of the country which directly harms the reputation of the family. To recapitulate, the nuclear family has
benefit
Suggestion
the benefit
benefits
 of establishment of
mutal
common to or shared by two or more parties
mutual
 understanding and basic needs can be easily
fulfill
completed to perfection
fulfilled
, whereas, there are disadvantages of lack social and emotional support to family members and children might not be
morally good person
Suggestion
morally good people
a morally good person
.

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  • Financial stability
  • Living standards
  • Concentrated resources
  • Parent-child bonding
  • Upbringing
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Supportive network
  • Cooperation
  • Multigenerational
  • Cultural traditions
  • Agricultural communities
  • Loneliness
  • Social competencies
  • Financial strain
  • Resource dilution
  • Education opportunities
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