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More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

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Having
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
are
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is
 the most
importent
of great significance or value
important
 part of
life
.
present days lot
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A present days lot
Present days lot
Present days lots
 of people tend to give birth to kids in their later age.
This
 essay will provide information why people avoid having children soon by outweighing advantages and disadvantages. These days a large number of couples decide to have babies after spending at least
few years
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a few years
 since their marriage. According to some experts, there are various reasons which urge parents to have children later in their
life
.
Career
, changes in social
belief
, women empowerment, escalating living expenses, increased
life
 expectancy are some of the major causes of
this
 trend. In my
belief
 advantages of having children later in
life
 outweigh its demerits.
First
, a growing number of parents are very passionate and enthusiastic in terms of
career
 development and their profession is the primary reason they do not expect to have children in the early stage of their marriage. It is intuitively obvious that in
this
 age of huge competition, unemployment and economic crisis, people around the world are constantly worried about their
career
 and job promotions.
As a result
, parents decide and determine to postpone their
first
 childbirth.
Second
, women empowerment has changed the old way of
life
 where a woman's sole responsibility was to look after the children. Since many wives are working these days, they decide to take babies after they reach a stable job position.
Furthermore
, social
belief
 regarding giving birth of children has changed dramatically and people are more concerned about the living expenses than the number of babies they have, unlike older generations.
Additionally
, parents who study full-time in universities
can not
can not
cannot
 concentrate on their studies competently if they become parents. Enhanced
life
 expectancy and changes in the social
belief
 are two other reasons for
this
 trend.
Undeniably people
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Undeniably, people
 who either work or run a business can reach to a stable position before becoming parents.
Thus
 they can take better care of their
babies which
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babies, which
 would have been impossible if the baby was born earlier. It is often a fact that having offspring early in
life
 can escalate expenditures and financial responsibilities of parents.
In particular
, if the parents cannot allocate time for them, they grow up with psychological issues.
Such
 young parents often lack the knowledge and
time
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the time
 they need to properly take care the baby. Ultimately, parents might put their
career
 at a risk as well as the future of their children if they become parents before they are mentally and economically stable. Reversely, having offspring in early
life
have
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has
 few advantages.
Such
 parents have new members in their family and their isolation would be extirpated and they will become more family-oriented. In conclusion, despite the pleasure of having a new baby in
early years
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the early years
 of marriage, parents who decide to have babies later can primarily, readily and precisely focus on their
career
, can easily
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 financial requirements and have sufficient time to persist, strive and struggle in order to have a stunning, and illuminated future in
life
.
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