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In some countries the average of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the cause of these problems and what measures coud be taken to solve them?

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From the dawn of invention of media, advertisements have become one of the prominent interfaces to promote products, nowadays many sport
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 companies are using sportsmen as their face of advertising.
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 aspect and conclude. One main factor that can put forward as a prime benefit of using athletes in publicizing the sports
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 is expanding the
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 value. Players in international sports have a great fan following.
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, they can be used not only as an ambassador for the firm but
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 as a source of marketing. It is said that the average sales had gone up by 78% when Sina Nehwal took Yonex shuttle
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a small vessel for travel on water
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 to promote. It is
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 exemplified
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 the growing number of people using Reebok sports
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 in India after Virat Kohli branding it. In brief, it is evident that the
sportsperson
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 can increase the sports
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brand
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 value in countries. Another point worth considering is it can help in getting other sports into countries. Some games are limited to some countries, so for gaining an adequate
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 of market sport
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 companies uses famous
sportspersons
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 to promote the
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 in their countries. Sports like Cricket which is an English game is quite popular in many of
Asian countries
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the Asian countries
, it is said that the famous
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 Nike is prompting Cricket in Canada by advertising Sachin Tendulkar posters and television,
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 they have recently organized an ice cricket to promote their
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.
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,
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 process has an adequate
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 of advantages there are some disadvantages. Some people only work for money and they can be a
brand
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 face for anything. One example is that in recent International Twenty-Twenty cricket matches some cricketers are used for promoting a sport-
drink which
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drink, which
 had a high
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 of doping bases and they have been paid a considerable
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 for promoting
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product
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,
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 resulted in 158 people hospitalized by consuming that drink. So it is clear that advertising by a sports person without knowing about the
product
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 has some negative implications In conclusion, many sports brands are using athletes to promote their products. While people buy these products without having a
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 thought, it promotes new sports and helps in the expansion of the
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 market. Despite the minor disadvantage, the benefit of using a player in promoting a sports
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 has more advantages

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