The diagram below shows the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
These figures depict the construction of
a
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LadyBrid
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ladybird
and its
life
period. It is clear from the figures that the
ladybrid
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ladybird
life
was
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occurred in four
changed
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in its
life
till it becomes
adult
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an adult
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ladybrid
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ladybird
.
According to
what is shown , The right figure
explain
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the body of
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the ladybrid
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ladybrid
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ladybird
ladybirds
.The top part of its body is a head and contains
of
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two eyes, two
antenno
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antenna
and
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a prontum
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prontum
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pronotum
.
Also
the body composite from Red Elystra
which
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exist
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in
wing
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the wing
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.
Also
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it has four legs and the bottom part is Abdomen . The left figure is shown the
life
period of the
ladybride
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ladybird
lady bride
, the first stage when the leaf became its age 2-5
days
.
Then
it passes through the larval stage
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nearlly
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nearly
21
days
.
While
the leaf passes the pupa stage
was took
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about 7
days
.
Finally
, we have
a
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adult
ladybrid
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ladybird
.
To sum up
, we could say that the
life
period of the
ladybrid
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ladybird
take
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about 33
days
starting with the leaf and
developed
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developing
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unitill
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until
the
complated
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completed
adult
ladybrid
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ladybird
.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ladybrid, life, days with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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