The diagram below shows the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
These figures depict the construction of
a
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apply
LadyBrid
and its Correct your spelling
ladybird
life
period. It is clear from the figures that the ladybrid
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ladybird
life
was
occurred in four Unnecessary verb
apply
changed
in its Replace the word
changes
life
till it becomes adult
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an adult
ladybrid
. Correct your spelling
ladybird
According to
what is shown , The right figure explain
the body of Change the verb form
explains
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the ladybrid
ladybrid
.The top part of its body is a head and contains Correct your spelling
ladybird
ladybirds
of
two eyes, two Remove the preposition
apply
antenno
and Correct your spelling
antenna
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a prontum
prontum
. Correct your spelling
pronotum
Also
the body composite from Red Elystra which
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apply
exist
in Correct subject-verb agreement
exists
wing
. Add an article
the wing
Also
it has four legs and the bottom part is Abdomen .
The left figure is shown the Add a comma
,Also
life
period of the ladybride
, the first stage when the leaf became its age 2-5 Correct your spelling
ladybird
lady bride
days
. Then
it passes through the larval stage about
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for about
nearlly
21 Correct your spelling
nearly
days
. While
the leaf passes the pupa stage was took
about 7 Change the verb form
took
days
.Finally
, we have a
adult Change the article
an
ladybrid
.
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ladybird
To sum up
, we could say that the life
period of the ladybrid
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ladybird
take
about 33 Change the verb form
takes
days
starting with the leaf and developed
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developing
unitill
the Correct your spelling
until
complated
adult Correct your spelling
completed
ladybrid
.Correct your spelling
ladybird
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ladybrid, life, days with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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