The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013
The given graph shows the incidence of
Americans
who ate fast food
in Add an article
a restaurant
the restaurant
restaurant
over a period of ten years from 2003 to 2013
As a general rule,it is quite obvious that almost half of Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
the
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apply
Americans
ate junk food
in eateries either once a week
or more than a few times a week
between 2003 and 2013.It can be seen that in the later period of time
more people choose not to eat fatty Add a comma
,time
food
, any more.
As the bar graph depicts ,almost one
Add a hyphen
one-third
third
of the American population opted to eat fast food
in bistries
once a Correct your spelling
berries
batteries
week
in 2003 and the ratio increased by some percentage over next
three years before it dropped to just over 25 Correct article usage
the next
percent
in 2013.Almost the same proportion of Change the spelling
per cent
Americans
preferred fatty food
once or twice a month and their ratio went higher over time.
Again ,around 13 % US
citizens ate at fast Change preposition
of US
food
shops and the ratio increased slightly over the next
seven years.Interestingly ,the people of America who had fast food
meals on daily basis were less than 5 percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
this
number decreased further
the rest of the decade.Folks who consumed junk food
over a week
were around 17 percent
and it raised up to 20 % in 2006 before it halted to just over 15 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
.In the Change the spelling
per cent
end
it can be seen that many Add a comma
,end
Americans
who used fast food
frequently had
stopped doing so after a decadeUnnecessary verb
apply
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