There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?

A developing tendency all over the world
that is
having a small
household
rather than a large
household
.
This
essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages about the tendency with relevant examples. The disadvantages of a small
household
. By planning a small
household
, our
population
is reduced,
as a result
, it impacts our economic growth and for
this
reason, many countries are not getting developed.
For example
, Africa in which are less
population so
Accept comma addition
population, so
that sometimes they hires many workers from different countries to do work in many sectors,
consequently
there capital goes to other countries.
On the other hand
, there are many advantages of small
household
,
such
as, reduce the family cost, parent’s gives proper education for their child and
also
develops economic growth. The advantages of a large
household
is
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are
a lot of inheritors, by
this
trend
,
population
is increased and
also
country has been developed.
In
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On
opposite side
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the opposite side
, there are several disadvantages,
firstly
, parents do not give proper time their children’s, so, children’s has gone toward
bad path
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the bad path
,
secondly
, a large family has to face so many problems,
thirdly
,
population
has increased by
this
trend
,
as a result
, the number of poverty gradually went up and
also
pollutions.
Such
as, in Bangladesh, there are so many problems
such
as poverty, pollutions and populations, only the reason
of
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for
large
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the large household trend
household
trend
. In conclusion, large family has more problems than small family, so that's why, people likes small family and the
trend
of a small family are increasing day by day around the world.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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