There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?

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A developing tendency all over the world
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having a small
household
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rather than a large
household
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.
This
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essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages about the tendency with relevant examples. The disadvantages of a small
household
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. By planning a small
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, our
population
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is reduced,
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, it impacts our economic growth and for
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reason, many countries are not getting developed.
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, Africa in which are less
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population so
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population, so
that sometimes they hires many workers from different countries to do work in many sectors,
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there capital goes to other countries.
On the other hand
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, there are many advantages of small
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,
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as, reduce the family cost, parent’s gives proper education for their child and
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develops economic growth. The advantages of a large
household
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is
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a lot of inheritors, by
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trend
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,
population
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is increased and
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country has been developed.
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the opposite side
, there are several disadvantages,
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, parents do not give proper time their children’s, so, children’s has gone toward
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the bad path
,
secondly
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, a large family has to face so many problems,
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,
population
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has increased by
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trend
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,
as a result
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, the number of poverty gradually went up and
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pollutions.
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as, in Bangladesh, there are so many problems
such
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as poverty, pollutions and populations, only the reason
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for
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the large household trend
household
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trend
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. In conclusion, large family has more problems than small family, so that's why, people likes small family and the
trend
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of a small family are increasing day by day around the world.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial stability
  • Living standards
  • Concentrated resources
  • Parent-child bonding
  • Upbringing
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Supportive network
  • Cooperation
  • Multigenerational
  • Cultural traditions
  • Agricultural communities
  • Loneliness
  • Social competencies
  • Financial strain
  • Resource dilution
  • Education opportunities
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