You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take
Dear Manoj,
I know you are doing well. As you are celebrating your sixtieth birthday next month, I want to give some suggestions regarding the way it could be celebrated.
Firstly
, I think the most important task is to select which type of party should be held. I must say it is better to go with a simple themed party, where everyone should dress in vintage-style suits and boots. As an early 1900s born, It will be grateful to bring back the old style.
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Secondly
, I think the 90's Retro Function hall will be a very good place to host the party. Linking Words
Last
month, I went to a family function in the same function hall, and everything in the building resembled the past era. As all our friends are meeting after quite a long time now, it will be a great place to memorize the school days.
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Furthermore
, I recommend you keep a retro troop for the music, as we are trying to create the old vibe, I know it is hard to find someone who can play vintage music, but I think I have a few contacts who might help us. looking forward to seeing you.
Best Regards,
Srinivas Varma.Linking Words
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Ensure your letter directly addresses the prompts given. While the content is interesting, it is crucial to follow the task instructions closely to effectively meet the task's requirements.
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Adopt a more succinct and direct opening to clarify the purpose of the letter immediately. Avoid extraneous greetings or remarks unrelated to the task at hand.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a structured approach to organizing your letter. Start with an introduction, follow with body paragraphs each covering a single point, and conclude with a summary or closing remark.
coherence cohesion
Incorporate transitional phrases to better connect ideas and paragraphs. This will enhance the flow of information and make your letter easier to follow.
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Consider adopting a formal or semi-formal tone throughout, as is fitting for correspondence with a teacher. This includes more formal salutations and closings, as well as appropriately formal language.