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Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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it is difficult to learn how to spend
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 is just one side that has to be considered. For me, the main question is why the parents cannot give the right advice to their kids? To leave
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 a personal subject in the hands of government and school means to ignore a key task of any parent: to be a good role model.
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