Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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gain plenty of wealth for creating their

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products,

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others do not, and even have troubles , related to their survival. At the same time, there is an opinion among individuals that the government should undertake something to deal with

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issue and reach equality. I agree with

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view partially, and opine that it is not only the politician's fault in

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situation.

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with,

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is, in general, a subjective creation and mostly depends on the artist. There is no guarantee for reaching success,

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is no reason for the

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to invest in the spheres of

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lead to wasted resources. Despite

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success,

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depends on the individual’s willingness and ability to market it. It can be exemplified with the nowadays creators,

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as the “Inoya” brand. Company owners create a distinct from other clothes shops by printing, designing themselves, and advertising it all around Kazakhstan, which is not supported by the government, but still gains a lot of economic success. Sometimes, even supported

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are not as successful as non-supported ones,

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, it is not only about the assistance from the country, it is about the work you include to create an

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and present it to the public.

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, the government should assist its

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, to enhance the products of their country and spread them all over the World. It is beneficial for them,

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the economic income, that the popularity of each can deliver to the

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. As soon as the country cheers the creators, the

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will be motivated to support the economy and the relationships, like investors and the project.

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, in Shwederland, the

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always tries to be involved in the

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of their citizens, and enhance their work conditions through facilities like shops and supplies.

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better social state trust among citizens and a passion for their traditional specificity. In conclusion, I support the point that individuals should pay more attention not only to the quality of their products

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to the demand for publicity and product advertising. At the same time, the

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should support its talents as well. Because it leads to economic and social growth, which are very crucial today.