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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign language is a waste of time To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days, Computers are translating a very quickly and accurately of the speech. But what is the most effective method for dealing with the learning of foreign speech is wasting time? I completely agree with
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 of all, Laptops are using many people in society. Technology has developed around the world to change of mother tongue into another a lingo. Presently, the Internet is using more people of the native tongue that doing a very fast in their works
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, students are applying of other countries to great benefits. There is an understanding probably of the application to use for everyone. RWTH University in Germany is preferable for masters
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 good job opportunities.
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, the learning of a foreign lingo is difficult for students.
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, Most of them are thinking about a waste of time and money, But they are valuing knowledge.
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, People who are not going to other countries, but they can learn. It does not give to skills about the tongue. There are wasting cash for the value of a set, yet some of the people do not have any values to prepare the language. It depends upon your the profile to get ready. In conclusion,
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 it is a common belief that desktops translate faster and clarity than learning of native language for a waste of clock. While there are easy to translate for technology is improving. I believe that learning of the language is damaging for money
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