In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There was a time when elders were better adjusted to the joint family structure with extended kin providing
care
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and support.
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,
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
, due to lack of
such
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caring system, taking
care
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of
elderly
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the elderly
has become
challenge
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challenging
challenged
. To remedy the problem, a relatively new trend is prevailing where elders are moving
into their
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into, their
age cohort in old age homes. In Britain,
this
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gives rise to a debate as to who should bear the
cost
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of taking
care
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of the elderly, the
government
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or the family. There are some people who are of the opinion that
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government
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the government
, being responsible for the welfare of its citizens should shoulder the responsibility of elderly
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care whereas
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care, whereas
on the other hand
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, few believe that burden of elderly
care
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should not be placed on the national exchequer rather families should bear
such
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cost
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. I am of the view that the families should bear the
cost
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of
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care
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. The
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and the foremost reason is the nature of parent child relationship. In my opinion, it is a moral and ethical obligation of children to extend
care
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, support and love to their parents when they reach old age like the way their parents did when the children were young.
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,
family
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the family
would better understand the elderly person and would be in a better position to provide better
care
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rather than relying on an absolute stranger. Elders would be more at ease and feel comfortable among their family members who would be emotionally attached to them and provide
care
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with affection.
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, since the
cost
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of elderly
care
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would not be borne by the state, it would save
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government
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the government
governments
a lot of money which can be utilized for some other beneficial
purpose specially in
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purpose, especially in
purpose especially in
desperate times of
economics
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economic
woes when
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government
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the government
is already resorting to austerity measures.
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, considering the aforementioned facts, it would be justified to say that families should pay for the
care
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of their elders.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aging population
  • Elderly care
  • Nursing homes
  • Social welfare
  • Intergenerational responsibility
  • Caregiving
  • Financial burden
  • Quality of life
  • Pension funds
  • Healthcare policy
  • Taxation
  • Subsidies
  • Private insurance
  • Long-term care
  • Sustainability
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