Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia. As many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsibility to monitor what students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

There is an
upgrowing
rate higher; raise in value or esteem
upgrading
issue of bulky children in Australia every
second
child
has overweight.
Acording
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A cording
to some people,
schools
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Schools
should be given the charge of checking the eating habits of their pupils and proportion of doing exercises too.
I personally
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I, personally
,
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,
do not agree with
this
slant because
istitutes
judge tentatively or form an estimate of (quantities or time)
estimates
are the places of learning,
however
, it is the job of parents
instead
of instructors, to nourish their
chidren
a young person of either sex
children
in a good manner
.
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.
Undoubtedly, teenage obesity is becoming a serious issue of
western world
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the western world
, because youth of those countries is mad
of
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about
eating junk food
instead
of various other nutritional products
moreover
,
slugish
moving slowly
sluggish
life style
is
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also causes
also
cause of becoming
blubby
.Obese
child
are
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is
at the risk of getting an unfit adulthood
that is
why, it is
necessay
absolutely essential
necessary
to control the weight of a
child
according to mass index. It is the viewpoint of some thinkers that educational places have a prominent role is term of checking the habits of a
child
even the eating habits too.But I oppose to these thinkers because parents have control over their
chid
a young person of either sex
child
and its actions. Some mothers
are too much strucked
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too much strike
are too much struck
are too much stacked
are too much strict
in their jobs that they tend to say to their kids to eat
rfast
acting or moving or capable of acting or moving quickly
fast
food which is full of sugars and fats,
owveruse
exploitation to the point of diminishing returns
overuse
of these foods
finally
makes the
child
heavy
then
how schools could investigate these flaws of health even if their parents promote them
.
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All in all, schools have the role of teaching and educating a
child
to train him for the
future it
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future, it
is the task of parents to cater their
child
.
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