Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia. As many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsibility to monitor what students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

There is an

upgrowing

rate higher; raise in value or esteem

upgrading

issue of bulky children in Australia every

second

child

has overweight.

Acording

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A cording

to some people,

schools

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Schools

should be given the charge of checking the eating habits of their pupils and proportion of doing exercises too.

I personally

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I, personally

,

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do not agree with

this

slant because

istitutes

judge tentatively or form an estimate of (quantities or time)

estimates

are the places of learning,

however

, it is the job of parents

instead

of instructors, to nourish their

chidren

a young person of either sex

children

in a good manner

.

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Undoubtedly, teenage obesity is becoming a serious issue of

western world

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the western world

, because youth of those countries is mad

of

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about

eating junk food

instead

of various other nutritional products

moreover

,

slugish

moving slowly

sluggish

life style

is

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also causes

also

cause of becoming

blubby

.Obese

child

are

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is

at the risk of getting an unfit adulthood

that is

why, it is

necessay

absolutely essential

necessary

to control the weight of a

child

according to mass index. It is the viewpoint of some thinkers that educational places have a prominent role is term of checking the habits of a

child

even the eating habits too.But I oppose to these thinkers because parents have control over their

chid

a young person of either sex

child

and its actions. Some mothers

are too much strucked

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too much strike

are too much struck

are too much stacked

are too much strict

in their jobs that they tend to say to their kids to eat

rfast

acting or moving or capable of acting or moving quickly

fast

food which is full of sugars and fats,

owveruse

exploitation to the point of diminishing returns

overuse

of these foods

finally

makes the

child

heavy

then

how schools could investigate these flaws of health even if their parents promote them

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All in all, schools have the role of teaching and educating a

child

to train him for the

future it

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future, it

is the task of parents to cater their

child

.

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