In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

One of the negative consequences of having a lot of fast

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is health problems which are happening to people in many different countries and It is believed that in order to solve

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problem, governments should increase the tax on fast

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to discourage people.

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true to a certain extent, I believe that there are some better solutions that governments can use

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. When people are rushing to get to their workplaces, they have limited time to eat breakfast or lunch so having fast

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is considered to be the simplest way for

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situation. Health problems are likely to occur with people who eat too much fast

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and nowadays those people are facing many different diseases

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as, overweight, and a high-sugary blood problem which can affect their work performances and

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studies

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solution, governments should set up an organization that survey about fast

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’s main

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consumers, then

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governments should do the campaign to encourage

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group of people to eat more clean

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by providing some healthy lifestyle clubs, advisors or shops in different areas to give people suggestions and encourage people to take care of their body.

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, governments should improve the educational system for younger generations. They should add the drawbacks of having unhealthy

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as fast

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in the lesson and school teachers should teach the

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students aware of

health problems and seriously raise awareness regarding how dangerous having too much fast

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can be. The students should know some of the fast-

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ingredients and how each and every kind of that can create negative impacts on their body. In conclusion, I somewhat agree with

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statement, although I

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I believe that eating so much fast

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will lead to

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a health problem

health problems

but there are some more useful measures that governments can use as a remedy

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it than just increasing fast-

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tax which are doing clean

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campaigns, and educating young people to realize the negative effects of eating unhealthy

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