You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Now a
days
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day
, it is rampant for people to purchase stuff and goods online.
This
essay will discuss the advantages of online shopping that outweighs the disadvantages. Shopping online has
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
benefits. It makes everything easy and accessible, because with a click of a
hand you
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hand, you
got the thing you like. The internet indeed is a great help for people, especially people who are always on the go. I, for
one do
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one, do
not have that much leisure time to
buys
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buy
food
on
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in
at
a supermarket or even clothes in a boutique.
This
method of making things easy had really made a difference, because I am able to utilize the time I would have
spend
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spent
in the market, as a period for me to relax.
In
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On
the other hand,
although
online shopping made everything
easy it
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easy, it
can
also
be a disadvantage.
Example
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An example
of which are poor quality of goods, wrong delivered item, malfunctions and many more. Even though we might be able to face these kinds of problems when buying goods
in
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on
the internet, its convenience still is very important to customer, since these kinds of encounters can easily be solved, due to the return and exchange policy. In conclusion, purchasing online goods can be a great benefit to the people, even with its other perks. The essay had explained that the advantages
on
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of
online shopping still
prevails
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prevail
. In my opinion accessible of the things we want to buy is always important as part of being a customer the quality would only be
second
on the option.
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