Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these vies and give your own opinion.

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school

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and co-education are the two major education types in modern society. Both of them have their supporters and

discommenders

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. In my view, students attending mixed schools could get better education no matter in physical or in mental. Students could cultivate a variety of interests from co-education. Because

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school

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the school

will provide lessons and lectures in (a?)

wild

marked by extreme lack of restraint or control

Wild

range of area in order to meet the requirements of both genders. It means boys and girls could have more curriculum choices from the mixed

school

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. In

this

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mean, the interest of student could easily be kindled from the mixed

school

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In addition

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, it is

benefit

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beneficial

for students to learn how to get

alone

with a forward motion

along

with the opposite

gender

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if they study together, which is

also

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a good approach for them to get prepared for the real society. Since it is impossible for a social

mam

a cultural unit (an idea or value or pattern of behavior) that is passed from one person to another by non-genetic means (as by imitation)

meme

man

/woman only contact with a single

gender

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in his /her whole life, the ability to communicate with the opposite sex is crucial. Co-education could help boys and girls better prepared for their future. Admittedly, educating students separately have

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done

some advantages. In the

first

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place,

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school

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the school

a school

could set up curriculums specially for the target

gender

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For example

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, science and PE classes in all-boys

school

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, while dancing and art courses for girls.

This

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approach could set up much more clear role models for each

gender

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Secondly

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, since

students

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the students

have little opportunity to study with the opposite sex, they can focus on their

study

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studies

but not love affairs.

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, contacting with single sex can easily cause students uncomfortable with the mixed-

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gender society

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gender, society

, which is a hidden trouble for their future developments. Based on above mentioned

affects

property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business

effects

, I still hold the

view point

a mental position from which things are viewed

viewpoint

that co-education has more advantage for students’ development than the separate

school

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

294 words

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gender segregation
peer pressure
academic performance
gender stereotypes
discrimination
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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these vies and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people say that museum should be free where as others opine that some entry fee should be there. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

you are preparing an event in the countryside. Write a letter to your friend and ask for help with the arrangements. What the event is. Why the event is being held? What arrangements have already been made? How your friend can help?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

In some coutries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them

Creative artists should always be given freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree on this IELTS topic?