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There is growing demand for fresh water nowadays and this is becoming a global problem. what are the causes and solutions.?

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It is true that the demand of fresh
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 is increasing in every corner of the world and will increase
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 in the future.
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 is becoming a world-wide problem. In
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 essay I will state causes of
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 and will provide solutions to encounter it in the following paragraphs. To embark with, due to increase in population and climate change has led to the problem of a shortage of drinking
water
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. Usage and consumption of
water
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 have been increasing exponentially from the past. As more and more people are adding to the population, ground
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 levels are decreasing.
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, excessive cutting of trees and burning forests for development has disturbed eco-logical balance.
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, in Delhi, outskirts are being developed by clearing forest to accommodate the increasing population.
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, rainfall is getting affected. Talking about solutions of above causes,
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, people needs to be taught the importance of fresh
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, So that they won't waste it.
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 awareness will make them use
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 wisely.
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, the government should make laws to protect forests in order to maintain eco-logical balance. Following that people should opt a habit of saving rain
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 as it is the only option to have reserves of
water
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 for those countries, whose geographical location are away from the sea. To illustrate, in Delhi, the government has alarmed people of
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 scarcity and told them for
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 harvesting. To conclude, increasing demand of fresh
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 is mainly due to overpopulation and human activities on forests.
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, people and the governments can jointly take the above measures to meet the demand of fresh
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