The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000 and 2020 and future projections for 2025.
This
data shows three important exportation wealth of Southland which are international tourism
, daily
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dairy
products
, and meat
products
in the year
2000 and recent year
and also
point out the estimated revenues of
the Change preposition
for
year
2025.
As the overall
trend, an export
of international tourism
increases gradually while
meat
products
, as predicted, will be decreased slightly. However
, dairy
products'
trend displays fluctuations. From 2000 until the recent day, Change noun form
products
Dairy
products
are the biggest proportion export
wealth of Southland follows
by international Wrong verb form
followed
tourism
and meat
products
respectively.
It is clearly seen that international tourism
has been continually developed in this
area because this
export
has been rising marginally and it is expected to reach almost 10 billion euro
in 2025. Fix the agreement mistake
euros
In contrast
, meat
products
seem to be slowing down. The overall
export
trend of this
fell gradually from 6 to 5.5 billion euro
and will continue to decline to 5 billion Fix the agreement mistake
euros
euro
in 2025. As shown in the figures, the Fix the agreement mistake
euros
export
of dairy
products
has been
changed rapidly in recent Unnecessary verb
apply
year
but it was estimated that the 500 million Fix the agreement mistake
years
euro
reducing
will occur in 2025.
Nowadays, it can be seen that Replace the word
reduction
dairy
product has the highest export
wealth, although
in the past it was international tourism
. However
, it is true that meat
products
play the smallest part in the country’s export
in every period. In 2025, it is projected that international tourism
will be at
the biggest part of country exportation again and in the meantime, the other two types of Change preposition
apply
export
products
will reduce slightly.Submitted by rodridthanawat on
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