The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000 and 2020 and future projections for 2025.

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000 and 2020 and future projections for 2025.
This
data shows three important exportation wealth of Southland which are international
tourism
,
daily
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dairy
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products
, and
meat
products
in the
year
2000 and recent
year
and
also
point out the estimated revenues
of
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the
year
2025. As the
overall
trend, an
export
of international
tourism
increases gradually
while
meat
products
, as predicted, will be decreased slightly.
However
,
dairy
products'
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trend displays fluctuations. From 2000 until the recent day,
Dairy
products
are the biggest proportion
export
wealth of Southland
follows
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followed
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by international
tourism
and
meat
products
respectively. It is clearly seen that international
tourism
has been continually developed in
this
area because
this
export
has been rising marginally and it is expected to reach almost 10 billion
euro
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euros
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in 2025.
In contrast
,
meat
products
seem to be slowing down. The
overall
export
trend of
this
fell gradually from 6 to 5.5 billion
euro
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euros
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and will continue to decline to 5 billion
euro
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euros
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in 2025. As shown in the figures, the
export
of
dairy
products
has
been
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changed rapidly in recent
year
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years
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but it was estimated that the 500 million
euro
reducing
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will occur in 2025. Nowadays, it can be seen that
dairy
product has the highest
export
wealth,
although
in the past it was international
tourism
.
However
, it is true that
meat
products
play the smallest part in the country’s
export
in every period. In 2025, it is projected that international
tourism
will be
at
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the biggest part of country exportation again and in the meantime, the other two types of
export
products
will reduce slightly.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourism, products, meat, year, export, dairy, euro with synonyms.
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  • Exports, main exports, projections, trends, significant changes, increased, decreased, speculate, external factors, global demand, technological advancements, trade policies, agriculture, technology, manufacturing, economic implications, employment, GDP, economic growth, global economic trends
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