The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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closely
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and
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with
.
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media
should focus on women empowerment and Suggestion
the media
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growth in societyof them or themselves
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India
in contrast
to which in 2019 growth of working female was reported to plunged
nearly 50 timesSuggestion
plunge
.
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media focus more on loot ,
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tendency
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tended
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lot number
of investors to invest Suggestion
a lot number
on
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in
developing nation
.
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developing nations
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India
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India
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Such
positive news remained uncovered by media whereas
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media, whereas
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students
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vital role
and leaves impression on Suggestion
a vital role
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the youth
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so
they need to come up with news which depicts to a very great extent or degree
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positive developmental aspect
of our nations.Suggestion
positive developmental aspects
a positive developmental aspect
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