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Some people believe that space exploration is beneficial to humanity. Others, however, think that it is useless. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is often argued that
space
 research is
favorable trend
Suggestion
a favourable trend
favourable trend
 for humans and the Earth, whereas others put forward the view that it is of no use and waste of money. I support the former statement because studying outer
space
 is likely to resolve pressing issues on our
planet
. On the one hand,
space
 exploration is widely criticized as a waste of valuable money. Indeed, every year, governments around the world allocate billions of dollars for doing the research, creating and launching spacecraft. Unfortunately, many rockets fail to bring expected results to scientists. NASA,
for instance
, has sent about 10 rockets since 2000, none of which were able to find signs of
life
 that sustain humans.
On the other hand
, in my opinion, discovering
life
 on another
planet
 would be a back-up plan for humanity. To be more specific, if
planet
 Earth becomes uninhabitable due to overpopulation or climate change, our civilization will have to colonize to alien
space
 to survive. To illustrate, Elon Musk came up with an idea to create a city with a million inhabitants on Mars, which is the result of years of studies on the
planet
.
In addition
, learning about
space
 will provide in-depth knowledge on our
planet
 itself and upcoming dangers.
This
 can be handy in terms of natural disasters or meteors that can devastate
life
 on Earth. Five years ago, there was an asteroid coming to collide with Earth, when Japanese scholars had already studied it and terminated with a nuclear bomb beyond our ozone layer. To conclude, whether to study
life
 beyond our
planet
 or not is a controversial topic. Despite the huge amount of costs involved, I strongly believe that
space
 exploration might facilitate to avoid disasters and help civilization to continue.
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