Today more an more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the sahara desert or the antartic. what are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist to visit such places?
Nowadays, the
number
of visitors
who would rather visit areas
that have difficult conditions
like the Sahara desert is increasing. The positive points of this
phenomenon are boosting the economy of the places
and learning new things about the region and their conditions
, however
, it brings some drawbacks like degraded environment and extreme cost for visiting these places
.
One of the advantages of visiting untouched areas
that have difficult conditions
is increasing our knowledge about their conditions
and environments. Visiting these kinds of places
not only leads to finding out about habitant animals but also
improves our knowledge about their adaptation to hard conditions
. Furthermore
, Local communities in unspoiled districts often encounter financial issues and increasing tourists
in these places
help local people
to improve their economic conditions
. By increasing visitors
in places
where conditions
are arduous, residential individuals' income is increased because tourists
need accommodation and food that are in basic demand and sometimes they purchase local products. For example
, in the past, local people
around Kvir Loot had difficult economic conditions
and cultivation was their main activity now by growing the number
of visitors
, they rent accommodation and sell hand-made products like carpets.
On the other hand
, increasing the number
of tourists
leads to the degradation of natural places
and an increase in spoiled areas
. One of the main consequences of the increasing number
of tourists
is rising garbage and the environment of these places
is degraded. It can be seen many habitant animals are in danger by humans. In addition
, one of the main reasons that people
do not go to these places
is the price of these trips and people
need to spend a lot of money to go to the unspoiled places
. Many agencies book these kinds of trips and in their description, they mention that visitors
need special types of equipment and insurance to start the journey and the community should spend a lot of money on these features. For instance
, based on an article that has been published by BBC, people
who would rather go to Everest must spend 25000 to 35000 dollars for different equipment including tickets, a sleeping bag, special clothes, and insurance.
In conclusion, increasing visitors
in places
that have hard conditions
has pros and cons boosting our knowledge about their environment and the species that live there, also
enhancing economic conditions
are positive points, although
, rising degradation and spoiled areas
, also
the cost of these kinds of trips are its disadvantages.Submitted by hadadianmohamadhossein on
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