In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

#areas #‘curfew’ #teenagers #doors #time #night #adult

There are many examples when countries had to impose curfew and restrictions on its own citizens. These restrictions and curfews depend upon the situation or turmoil which the country

is been facing

Suggestion

has been facing

is facing

for example

, political unrest or may be increased rate of crimes against the children/teenagers. Later is the reason because of which, in some areas of

Suggestion

the US

, teenagers are strictly prohibited to be involved in outdoor activities without being accompanied by an adult after a certain

time

. Not only teenagers are often seen as a soft and easy target by the

criminals but

Accept comma addition

criminals, but

also

teenage is the period of life in which one is attracted more often towards the activities which should have been avoided at that

time

. Criminal cases against the citizen like that of robbery, snatching and street mugging

are often reported

Suggestion

is often reported

to happen at a very

higher

Suggestion

high

rate after a certain

time

at night as compared to the other times of the day. These criminals roam in the city with an advantage of darkness to cover their identity. Mostly they choose targets who are not going to resist and teenagers are most likely to be targeted,

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

when spotted alone. It is human tendency to get attracted by the things and objects that are harmful and

also

the activities that are often prohibited before a certain age and should be avoided. Teenage is the

time

of human life when one is still confused on making

decision

Suggestion

the decision

a decision

decisions

of what is good and what is not for himself or the society.

For

example I

Accept comma addition

example, I

have myself seen many teenagers getting involved in smoking and drugs just because they feel it makes them look cool and

smarter

Suggestion

smart

. Teenagers are going to be the future of the society. So, if a curfew is imposed in some areas on outside movement of teenagers without any adult being with them, after certain night

time

is totally fine. It is the duty and responsibility of the state to take any necessary actions to take care of its citizens,

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

the ones who are going to become the future stakeholders of the society. Desperate times need desperate measures.

Sat Feb 08 2020

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

354 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4.5
band
More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think is a possible solution?
Amount of customers in developing states who are buying cars for the first time have increased. The main problems this causes air pollution and raised road traffic, and the most viable solution is well-designed public transport system.
4.5
band
Some people believe online reading material should be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed materials should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
in era of gobalization , the concept of online studies became popular nowadays because people believed that it save their money and environment by buying paper based books but some believed that books are more usefull as well as good for their eyesight. According to my prospective i will discuss both of the advantages and drawbacks for both statements.
6.5
band
Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build homes in the styles of their own choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The demand for new houses is on the rise in communities due to the growing population in the area. While some argue that housing concepts should be based on traditional ones, from my perspective, the government should allow people to construct homes according to their needs. It would bring more opportunities to the community.
6.5
band
Some people say that computer skills should be added to primary subjects such as reading, writing, and math in elementary schools. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There are many subjects learned by young pupils in their elementary schools, ranging from numerical literacy to computer subjects. Some people believe that, in this digital era, computer skills play an important role, therefore this subject should be a compulsory subject taught by teachers in their schools such as the other subjects. I, personally, agree that the computer should be taught from an early stage to students because of some reasons.
7
band
In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
With a higher level of mobility in the modern world, movements to and fro within a country have become more prevalent than in the past. Particularly, the phenomenon of movement from rural to urban areas has aroused much controversy among various circles. Although there are good arguments in favour of the movement, I personally believe that the movement is a negative development as a whole.

In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

Fully explain your ideas

More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think is a possible solution?

Some people believe online reading material should be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed materials should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build homes in the styles of their own choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that computer skills should be added to primary subjects such as reading, writing, and math in elementary schools. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?