In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsiblity. What are your opinions on this?

Engaging some

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Engaging in some

children with some kind of paid

work

is considered as a wrong treatment, while some people believe that it can contribute a more positive impact on them.

This

essay will explain why I think the drawbacks of a paid

work

for children are outweighed by the benefit. Considering

firstly

the positives, the crucial advantage of having a job for children is they can earn some money to fund their life. Having a salary is a fundamental resource for them to learn how to live an independent life, and

as a result

, they will start taking responsibility for their daily needs.

Besides

earning money, paid

work

is not only giving valuable

experience

to get a future job, but

also

improving their skill to deal with any problem

in

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with

the working environment. The expertise that people need in the office,

for instance

, emotional quotient, will be learned

effectively

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effected

by their working

experience

, not by the class process.

On the other hand

, letting children

work

also

does present some problems.

For example

, a paid job will distract them from their focus on learning the other necessary skills like numeracy and literacy in a school. School, as an educational institution, will equip both of those skills for their student.

This

is a so critical because numeracy and literacy will help to improve logical thinking, problem-solving, and exploring new knowledge. To sum up,

although

paid

work

for children is beneficial in terms of giving valuable

experience

, improving the learning process, and teaching to take responsibility, it will be more important to focus on the learning process in the school. If working

experience

has an urgency, it can be combined as a vocational curriculum system.