In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solution?
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To tackle this
issue and to cope up with this
problem the Central Committe or Governing Body of such
sports needs to keep medical tests of all players more often and also
files a petition to ban all such
products so that they may not available easily in the market. Furthermore
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start a compaign
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