In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solution?

Nowadays,
competitons
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
competitions
among the individuals rises in every sector of life as compared to the previous some
decades whether
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decades, whether
, in the field of study, research, innovations and
sports but
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sports, but
, if we talk particularly about
sports
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sports, then
then
many athletes are now using various drugs and
such
substances that will increase their performances in the field
however
,
this
also
led to become a controversy for them
.
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.
In
this
essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will address the possible reasons and solution of
this
situation. As the competition sharply rises in all sports, professional players want to get more fame and fortune in
this
sports industry, and
to gain
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gain
such
heights they tend to use some shortcuts for that, rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
hardwork
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hard work
. As drugs are the easiest way and the most
conveninent
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
and feasible way to increase their stamina and improve their
perfomances
a dramatic or musical entertainment
performance
in the match.
However
, these substances
are
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also have
also
have
plethora
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a plethora
of side effects on the human body. By using
such
products, the face off
also become
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has also become
also becomes
is also becoming
unfair as one player is doing all the
hardwork
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hard work
to get there and
other
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the other
is
relaying
have confidence or faith in
relying
on medication
subsequently
, if those
player
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players
with fake stamina won the match, led others to use the same path to earn those
wins which,
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wins, which
greatly affects those particular sports and they
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
their charm and importance among the masses as controversy
rises
come into existence; take on form or shape
arises
and player
also
get their career ended due to
this
. To tackle
this
issue and to cope up with
this
problem the Central Committe or Governing Body of
such
sports needs to keep medical tests of all players more often and
also
files a petition to ban all
such
products so that they may not available easily in the market.
Furthermore
, they should
also
start a
compaign
a race between candidates for elective office
campaign
of portraying the side effects of those products and to create a concept in the minds of players that
hardwork
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hard work
always paid off. To conclude, if
Government
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the Government
should take all above mentioned
measures
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measures, then
then
the sports will become more popular and a healthy competition will
arose
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arise
between the competitor which,
also
bring charm and joy for the viewers and those who want to be a part of it in near future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Performance-enhancing drugs (PEDs)
  • Doping
  • Anti-doping regulations
  • Detection methods
  • Ban substances
  • Ethical issues
  • Health risks
  • Fair play
  • Sportsmanship
  • Stakes
  • Pressure to succeed
  • Enforcement
  • Awareness programs
  • Testing frequency
  • Entourage
  • Science advancement
  • Financial gains
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