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People can perform everyday tasks, such as shopping and banking as well as business transactions, without meeting other people face-to-face because of technology. What are the effects of this on individual and society as a whole.

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Technology is emerging at a rapid rate nowadays. Many moons ago, we were used to
perform
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 manual operations for all the bits in banking,
shopping
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and shopping
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. Technology bestowed us
a
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new realm in which we have so many opportunities to learn, explore and evolve; a
complete
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 new modern age era. Today, these services are available
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tip
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 of your hand. Today, anyone can do banking, shopping or any other activity which is connected
with
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internet
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the internet
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 and services from anywhere in the world.
People
 do not have to wait in long queues in
bank
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banks
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 to withdraw their hard-earned money. They do not have to
phsically
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physically
 interact with any banking person. They can interact with
helpdesk
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the helpdesk
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 at any given time.
Likewise
,
people
 like to do the shopping on the go; they prefer an easy way out. With great power comes great responsibility. Technology
also
 has its own adverse effects on civilization. It makes
people
 lazy, they want everything
on
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 their fingertips without going anywhere physically. Physical interaction is still considered way better than doing a video/voice chat. It is no surprise that
,
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 we have the tools available today which has made our lifestyle so easy; and all the substantial assets within our scope. But, we
also
 have the risk of
loosing
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losing
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 out on
a
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apply
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face-to-face social interaction because
,
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people
 have been indulged in social media these days. So, we have to carefully analyze and think
accordingly
.
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