The internet has become profoundly efficient and popular that people choose it as a platform to learn. Some believe that it would eventually replace the need for books. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that
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has become so fast and is being used for learning purposes
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it will eventually replace the books
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I strongly agree
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point as net is easily available and user friendly
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In the modern world, technological advancement is so much rapid because of the
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that if someone does not use it
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will lag far behind
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Everything is available in web starting from books to online purchasing and it is very easy to use
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, if someone intends doing research
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he does not need to go to the library in search of books. Some will be available
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others may not be present, which creates the difficulty
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, availability of
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The majority of books are available and just one click away.
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with the help of google scholar we can search any article online and read it.
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, Laptop or mobile phone is easier to carry, contrary to the books which have weight and
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drawback, that old books which were found in ancient libraries may not be available online
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Researchers have identified
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problem and taking measures to upload these old books on the web so that the electronic version of these books are available
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even if they are made accessible on payment.
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many historical Islamic books have been uploaded on electronic library of Mecca
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indeed is, a giant leap towards globalisation. In conclusion, the velocity of the web has made life much easier in the present era when it comes to reading books or research purposes and will replace the books completely in the near future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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