In many countries today,parents are able to choose to send their children single sex schools or educational schools,some people think that children going to single sex schools have disadvantages

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Nowadays, changes covered over the every aspect of the our life. One of the change occurs in the schools.

This

change gives opportunity to parents to choose which

school

is preferable for their children.

However

, in some peoples' opinion it has some disadvantages.

This

essay will examine

this

issue.

Firstly

, it is too weird to divide schools into single sex and education

school

However

this

practice nowadays widespread over the world. The biggest negative side of

this

would impact on children's future lives. It means in the far future they might have difficulties with boys or girls. In fact, they would have difficulties in relationships.

For instance

, the child had gone to a single sex

school

would have difficulty not only to find his or her sweetheart but

also

relationship between them. To conclude, considering that attending to single

school

has more disadvantages rather than ordinary educational schools.

Sun Feb 09 2020

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

148 words

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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