The advent of the internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working arrangement has more advantages or disadvantages? Share personal examples in your essay.

The

internet

has

facilitd

make easier

facilitated

working at

home

instead

going to

office

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the office

.

However it

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However, it

has decreased contact among people.

This

essay shall consider the advantages and disadvantages of working at

home

and

ent

either extremity of something that has length

end

went

at

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on

a personal approach. On one hand, working at

home

saves us time and money.

Firstly

, time can be flexible when we

work

at

home

, which means anyone can organize his timetable depend on his priorities.

Moreover

, the worker would be his

ownchef

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own chef

.

For example

, I have a friend

works

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work

late at night,

thing

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things

would be impossible if he had to go at

office

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the office

everyday

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every day

.

Secondely

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Secondly

, the charges of transport would be earned

as a result

of none use of cars or public transportations.

Although

there are many benefits of the

internet

, it

also

has many

negatives

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negative

effects. On

other hand

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the other hand

, we

can not

can not

cannot

deny that

internet

has a lot of disadvantages. It drawbacks the

developpement

act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining

development

of

person's relationships

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a person's relationships

.

For instance

, my cousin is a reserved person. She choose to

work

at

home

so she does not have any contact with

outside world

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the outside world

as a

result she

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result, she

does not have any friend and she can not start any face-to-face

consersation

the use of speech for informal exchange of views or ideas or information etc.

conversation

with a

stronger

anyone who does not belong in the environment in which they are found

stranger

.

Further

, staying at

home

learns laziness and turn up badly on

individual's health

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an individual's health

. Moving to

work

is like doing

exercice

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercise

exercises

exercised

everyday. In summary, the

internet

helps a lot in any kind of job and enables people to

transfert

transfer somebody to a different position or location of work

transfer

the

work

at

home

sometimes. But I disagree that homes transform a

plce

a point located with respect to surface features of some region

place

of

work

and I do not think it will come true in foreseeable future.