The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?
You should spend about 40 minutes on
this
task. Write about the following topic: The increase in mobile phone
use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones
can also
be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones
? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. Type in words from the text and click on 'Guess' or press ENTER. (Score +1 per correct word) Click on any gap to see the word. (Score -1 per word) You may want to see the text before you start. (Score -10 to see the text) Benefits and disadvantages of mobile phones
In our day to
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day-to-day
day
life the
mobile Correct article usage
apply
phones
have a significant role for
the communication between Change preposition
in
people
and their business
. Nowadays Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
people
used
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use
phone
not only for Fix the agreement mistake
phones
the
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apply
phone
calls. One of the main advantages through
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of
the
mobile Correct article usage
a
phone
is social networking is much faster and easier. Also
, can use it all other technical purpose
like taking photographs, banking, gaming, travelling Change the wording
purposes
purpose
etc. There is some disadvantage Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
while
using mobile Change preposition
to
phones
. Emitting radiation from mobile phone
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phones
makes
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creates
the
critical medical and health Correct article usage
apply
problem
for human Fix the agreement mistake
problems
being
. Some of the medical research Fix the agreement mistake
beings
state
that these radiations cause several kinds of cancer in Correct subject-verb agreement
states
human
body Add an article
the human
also
chance to affect Correct word choice
and also
badly
to human reproduction system. Another main concern about the mobile is to distract the personal relationship. In Rephrase
apply
present
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the present
day
the
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apply
people
do not want to spend time with family, and they always keep scrolling in
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on
phones
. Some people
are looking for new unhealthy relationships and it makes
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has
negative
impact Add an article
a negative
in
trusted Change preposition
on
relation
. Children spend more time Replace the word
relationships
in
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on
phones
rather than studying cause bad
impact on their education carer. Mobile Correct article usage
a bad
phones
are strictly prohibited while
driving because it
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they
causes
accidents on the roads. In film Correct subject-verb agreement
cause
theatre
and cinemas Fix the agreement mistake
theatres
requesting
users to switch their Verb problem
apply
phone
to off or silent. Fix the agreement mistake
phones
To conclude
, in some points
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points,
phones
have some drawbacks but it gives huge helps
for human's Change the wording
help
bits of help
day
to day
life. So, people
use it for the good aspect rather than wasting their time and it ensure
great advantage Change the verb form
ensures
on
their life.Change preposition
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