Government should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Given reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Shortage of resources is
reality
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a reality
and we as a human
are using
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is using
it rapidly.
This
fear actually made authorities to take steps of introducing new resources of
energy
. I strongly agree with the idea of authorities encouraging people to
use
substitute form
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a substitute form
of
energy
which will help us save our present sources of
energy
and provide ourselves with
more affordable
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a more affordable source
source
of
energy
. Even though,
government
face a lot of criticism from opposition political parties and many economists who argues, that
government
is spending a lot money on promotion of new sources of
energy
for example
, by advertising on tv or billboards which will eventually waste
tax payer
someone who pays taxes
taxpayer
money.
Moreover
,
they
of them or themselves
their
belief that shortage of existing
energy
is not real and false claim made by
government
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the government
and there is no need to find
new
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a new substitute
substitute
of existing
energy
. But in my opinion authorities should continue with the promotion of
substitute
form of
energy
, because
this
will help us preserve our existing
source
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sources
of
energy
and find
more affordable
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a more affordable source
source
, from which we can benefit in near future.
For example
, in my country Pakistan, many
electricity providing
Accept comma addition
electricity, providing
companies encourage us to
use
solar panel
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solar panels
a solar panel
to generate
electricity
from
sun light
the rays of the sun
sunlight
and
use
it as a
substitute
of existing
source
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sources
of
electricity
for our liveliness. And if we have any unused or leftover
electricity
, we can actually sell it to
government
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the government
who will
use
it to for cities where there is
shortage
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a shortage
of
electricity
. In
future
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the future
, I hope that
government
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the government
will keep
this
determination of introducing
new
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a new substitute form
new substitute forms
substitute
form of
energy
which will be
environment
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environmentally
friendly and affordable.

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