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Government should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Given reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Shortage of resources is
reality
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a reality
 and we as a human
are using
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is using
 it rapidly.
This
 fear actually made authorities to take steps of introducing new resources of
energy
. I strongly agree with the idea of authorities encouraging people to
use
substitute form
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a substitute form
 of
energy
 which will help us save our present sources of
energy
 and provide ourselves with
more affordable
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a more affordable source
source
 of
energy
. Even though,
government
 face a lot of criticism from opposition political parties and many economists who argues, that
government
 is spending a lot money on promotion of new sources of
energy
for example
, by advertising on tv or billboards which will eventually waste
tax payer
someone who pays taxes
taxpayer
 money.
Moreover
,
they
of them or themselves
their
 belief that shortage of existing
energy
 is not real and false claim made by
government
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the government
 and there is no need to find
new
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a new substitute
substitute
 of existing
energy
. But in my opinion authorities should continue with the promotion of
substitute
 form of
energy
, because
this
 will help us preserve our existing
source
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sources
 of
energy
 and find
more affordable
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a more affordable source
source
, from which we can benefit in near future.
For example
, in my country Pakistan, many
electricity providing
Accept comma addition
electricity, providing
 companies encourage us to
use
solar panel
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solar panels
a solar panel
 to generate
electricity
 from
sun light
the rays of the sun
sunlight
 and
use
 it as a
substitute
 of existing
source
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sources
 of
electricity
 for our liveliness. And if we have any unused or leftover
electricity
, we can actually sell it to
government
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the government
 who will
use
 it to for cities where there is
shortage
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a shortage
 of
electricity
. In
future
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the future
, I hope that
government
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the government
 will keep
this
 determination of introducing
new
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a new substitute form
new substitute forms
substitute
 form of
energy
 which will be
environment
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environmentally
 friendly and affordable.

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