Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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Yes,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
totally agree with
this
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statement about the
culture but
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culture, but
not the
way
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a certain man
dress
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dresses
up, because, we cannot really judge a person the
way
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he/she handle herself from outside without knowing what is inside.
For example
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
grew up with a family who is not so vulgar from the
way
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we dress, like if we go
out especially
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out, especially
us girls we need to wear a cover up clothes
otherwise
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people would look at us with judgements, it's not easy
though but
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though, but
it depends how we handle it,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
mean, it is part of our culture,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
did grew
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did grow
have grown
up in a liberated family so everything about culture matters a lot. People just see as a naive, innocent
girl
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just by the
way
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
dress, but of course they will not know my
attitude not
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attitude, not
unless we live in the same roof or we are related and
such
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.
Moreover
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, people will still act like they know you just by judging how you look, like of a
girl
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dresses like a vulgar clothes they will say
this
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girl
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is liberated and having a stinky attitude, and if they see a
girl
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who is shy, prime and proper they will say she's a good daughter, to be honest, based on my experienced in my college years
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
know a lot of girls who is timid and shy but got pregnant
early
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earlier
and those girls who are
brat
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brats
a brat
and naughty finishes the college with flying
colors
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
. In conclusion, we shall not be bias
on
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in
judging anyone just by the
way
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we see them.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • garments
  • traditional attire
  • sartorial choices
  • expressive style
  • cultural identity
  • psychological implications
  • non-verbal cues
  • globalization
  • perceptions
  • professional demeanor
  • societal norms
  • economic constraints
  • subcultures
  • fashion movements
  • individualism
  • stereotype
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