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In order to study at universities students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all of the students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that fees for higher
education
 is expensive and not affordable for everyone.
So according
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So, according
 to some
university
 should be free for all people regardless of their background. In my opinion, I agree that
university
education
 ought to be free for everyone as it will greatly benefit both individuals and
society
. A good reason to abolish the
university
 fee is that it gives
people whether
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people, whether
 they are rich or poor equal rights. At present, students from a poor background are prevented from entering the
university
 because they are unable to pay the bills.
This
 excludes a large proportion of
society
 and is discriminatory which can be avoided by getting rid of tuition fee. Another point to consider is that having no fees at
university
 means that students will no longer have to work at the same time as studying to pay the tuition costs.
For instance
, around three quarters of all students in the UK must work either full time or part time to pay their fees. Free higher
education
 should,
therefore
, produce better results as students will be able to get immersed in their studies exclusively.
Finally
, free
university
education
 will benefit the
society
 in the long run. It will open up higher
education
 to a wider section of the population.
This
 will result in increasing the number of educated people.
In other words
, having a great resource of skilled and knowledgeable professionals will bring greater rewards to
society
 as a whole.
Moreover
, it can bring more economic advantages to a country that shows itself to be prosperous and leading in various fields. In conclusion, free
university
education
 is a must for every country that values equal rights and that
wishes
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wish
 to advance. The cost of free
education
 will
recouped
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recoup
 many times over by the benefit it brings.
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