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Band 7

Your local liblary is hiring a new staff member,and you are interested in applying for the position. Write a letter to the liblary manager to apply for the job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am enquiring as to whether you currently have any positions in the area of librarian.I discovered a new peace about the research for an employee. I am about to graduate from university, and with my background in philology, I'm confident that I'm a strong candidate for
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 position. Until graduation, I'm looking for a part-time job, and after that, if possible, I would like to transition to a full-time position Since childhood, I’ve been passionate about reading. I love experiencing the emotions of the main characters and immersing myself in the different worlds books offer.
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, I have a strong memory and get along well with new people For the past 10 years, I have been visiting city libraries and searching for
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experience at jobs relating to books I am eager to contribute and grow within your team. Please feel free to contact me if you need any
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 information. I’m looking forward to hearing from you Sincerely, Parker.

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Make sure to clearly state the position you are applying for at the beginning of the letter to enhance clarity.
coherence and cohesion
Consider organizing your paragraphs more clearly; each should focus on a single point to improve readability.
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Use a more formal greeting and closing to better match a professional tone.
strength
Your passion for reading and experience with libraries are well expressed, making your application personal and relatable.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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