Environmental problems such as pollution and climate change affect all the people in the world. Although global decisions are made to reduce these problems, the solutions are not effective. Why are the solutions ineffective? How can these problems be solved?

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Nature's address many issues,
such
as global warming and pollution. In the modern era,
This
has drastically transformed the life of the populace. In spite of all
this
, many efforts have been taken to deal with
such
sensitive global problems, but somehow all the efforts turn to fail. There are numerous reasons for the failure of all the trials.
First
and foremost reason is not obeying the rules made by government to decrease Air pollution.
For example
, recently, Delhi Government, came with a policy
such
as even/odd. Where days were divided for even numbered car to drive on some day and odd numbered car to be driven on other. In spite of knowing the fact, that air pollution is hampering our Environment, population does not take it seriously and break rules.
Also
,
this
has caused some serious health issues.
For example
, Airway disease like Asthma.
Secondly
, how hard government tries, with solo efforts, they alone cannot plant trees alone to curb global warning. Citizens equal contribution is needed and we do not take initiative to plant trees.
Therefore
, Ozone layer has thinned out. In Australia, due to thinning of an Atmospheric layer, every fifth person is at risk to face diseases like skin cancer. There are Plethora of way to deal global climatic change. One should not use less car and closer distances should be covered by walking or by the use of Bicycle. In Extreme conditions,
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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