Some people feel that entertainers ( e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

The
job
of movie stars, musicians or sports stars are the dream
job
of majority of people especially teenagers.
However
, I entirely agree that
this
kind of
job
should be paid too much money compared to other types of jobs.
Analyzing
Suggestion
Analysing
the phenomenon of highly paid of celebrities and said what kind of jobs deserve to be well-paid.
Firstly
, celebrities like models, sports stars and musicians should be paid well due to their short career.
For example
, the career of football players
are finished
Suggestion
is finished
in early age. Between 30 to 35 years-old on average.
Similarly
to models.
Although
Suggestion
Despite
their successful career, most entertainers have been struggling to find new assignment when they become older, they would have no revenue
as a result
.
That is
why celebrities should be highly paid to insure their future by making project. Take the example of football players in Tunisia. They run coffee shop.
On the other hand
, there are other occupations are very important in our
life
but they are neglected.
For instance
, the field of medicine. I think doctors and nurses deserve to have higher salaries. If we take the example of doctors' position, sometimes they work 24 hours per day a stretch. It is clear that their profession is the most noble
job
in the world because they save human
life
. Their role is vital in our
life
,
that is
why the government should give them more attention. To conclude, entertainers, doctors or whatever is the kind of
job
must be well-paid. Because an income is the only assurance of human
life
. And I think it is the responsibility of the government to cater well income to its citizens.
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