Some people feel that entertainers ( e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?
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job
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job
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this
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job
should be paid too much money compared to other types of jobs. Use synonyms
Analyzing
the phenomenon of highly paid of celebrities and said what kind of jobs deserve to be well-paid.
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Firstly
, celebrities like models, sports stars and musicians should be paid well due to their short career. Linking Words
For example
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are finished
in early age. Between 30 to 35 years-old on average. Suggestion
is finished
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Despite
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That is
why celebrities should be highly paid to insure their future by making project. Take the example of football players in Tunisia. They run coffee shop.
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On the other hand
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life
but they are neglected. Use synonyms
For instance
, the field of medicine. I think doctors and nurses deserve to have higher salaries. If we take the example of doctors' position, sometimes they work 24 hours per day a stretch. It is clear that their profession is the most noble Linking Words
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that is
why the government should give them more attention.
To conclude, entertainers, doctors or whatever is the kind of Linking Words
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must be well-paid. Because an income is the only assurance of human Use synonyms
life
. And I think it is the responsibility of the government to cater well income to its citizens.Use synonyms
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