Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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A few number of people suppose that the way to find a solution of the environmental issue is to raise the value and p
rice
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the price
of fuel for cars and other means. In my opinion, increasing the price of gas for cars it will save the inhabitance
life
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;a
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ctually I will damage the environment.
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as, pollution disturbed in the
air
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and the effects on agriculture land. In a daily
life
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, the pollution h
as raising
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is raising
has been raising
has raised
was raising
has been raised
widely
;
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;
furthermore
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, the amount of co2 spreads in the
air
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and enter into the p
eople
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person's
lung,
subsequently
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, they are suffering from cancer and a difficulty of breathing.
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, China has overpopulation in 1985. They suffered from diseases because the number of cars and vehicles that spreads abuse into the atmosphere.
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, many people were harmed their sight and many illnesses. The governmental and the minister of h
ealth accumulated
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health, accumulated
to find a way to solve
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his obstacles.
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these obstacles
this obstacle
The cultivation was deducted by output of vehicles.
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, it is better for seedling
life
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to grow in a clear
air
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because of it is providing us with foods that's people
life
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depending on it.
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modern country has m
any
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much
progress in the industry, the huge effect on the atmosphere resulted from factories and industry
life
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.
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, Egypt in 1985 lost m
any
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much
of people's
life
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because of the traditional cars was invented with low material
that is
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impact on flowers
life
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.
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, f
olks
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folk
folks'
life
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devastated. In conclusion, pure
air
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and agriculture land are essential in any country that g
overnment
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the government
must put restricted laws to preserve the environment. I agree with jumping the gasoline value will protect the environment. =

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental sustainability
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • public transportation
  • carbon footprint
  • economic incentives
  • alternative energy vehicles
  • fuel-efficient
  • government subsidies
  • economic disparity
  • urban planning
  • rural infrastructure
  • sustainable development
  • carbon tax
  • green technology
  • demand elasticity
  • energy conservation
  • climate change mitigation
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