Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A few number of people suppose that the way to find a solution of the environmental issue is to raise the value and p
rice
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the price
of fuel for cars and other means. In my opinion, increasing the price of gas for cars it will save the inhabitance
life
;a
Accept space
;
ctually I will damage the environment.
Such
as, pollution disturbed in the
air
and the effects on agriculture land. In a daily
life
, the pollution h
as raising
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is raising
has been raising
has raised
was raising
has been raised
widely
;
Accept space
;
furthermore
, the amount of co2 spreads in the
air
and enter into the p
eople
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person's
lung,
subsequently
, they are suffering from cancer and a difficulty of breathing.
For example
, China has overpopulation in 1985. They suffered from diseases because the number of cars and vehicles that spreads abuse into the atmosphere.
Therefore
, many people were harmed their sight and many illnesses. The governmental and the minister of h
ealth accumulated
Accept comma addition
health, accumulated
to find a way to solve
t
his obstacles.
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these obstacles
this obstacle
The cultivation was deducted by output of vehicles.
However
, it is better for seedling
life
to grow in a clear
air
because of it is providing us with foods that's people
life
depending on it.
Although
modern country has m
any
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much
progress in the industry, the huge effect on the atmosphere resulted from factories and industry
life
.
For instance
, Egypt in 1985 lost m
any
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much
of people's
life
because of the traditional cars was invented with low material
that is
impact on flowers
life
.
Consequently
, f
olks
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folk
folks'
life
devastated. In conclusion, pure
air
and agriculture land are essential in any country that g
overnment
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the government
must put restricted laws to preserve the environment. I agree with jumping the gasoline value will protect the environment. =

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental sustainability
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • public transportation
  • carbon footprint
  • economic incentives
  • alternative energy vehicles
  • fuel-efficient
  • government subsidies
  • economic disparity
  • urban planning
  • rural infrastructure
  • sustainable development
  • carbon tax
  • green technology
  • demand elasticity
  • energy conservation
  • climate change mitigation
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