The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Nowadays, online shopping is getting greater every day which will cause in closed shops in all towns and cities.
This
essay will present reasons and examples for that.
Often, people work very long and are tired afterwards. That is
why they don’t want to go into the city for shopping. Lying on the couch while searching for new trousers is way more comfortable than walking from shop
to shop
. For instance
, black Friday is characterised for being stressed because of traffic jam and crowded people. On the internet, you are able to shop
bargains with the privilege of avoiding stress
Moreover
, people don’t have time
anymore. Long working days are often followed by planned free
Suggestion
a planned free time
the planned free time
time
. For example
, going to the gym, meeting friends by coffee, visiting concerts etc. Therefore
, finding time
for shopping can be difficult, when it is not your hobby number one. That is
why it is handy to be able to compare different trousers from different online shops while sitting in the train or cuddling with your boyfriend in the bed. It saves time
to spend it on activities you really enjoy. For instance
, if you want to see different T-shirts from different brands, you are often forced to go to different shops and take photos to compare them. If you shop
on your computer, you can open websites of different online shops which makes comparing easier and often it is cheaper.
To sum up, shops in towns and cities will close, because of our fast life style. We work long and want to spend as much time
as possible on our free time
. Therefore
, online shopping is more efficient and comfortable.Submitted by hannah.s on
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