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Some people think that e-book are the death of the paper books, while others think that paper books will never disappear. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Now a days people believe that e-
book
 has become very popular,
however other
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however, other
 thinks that paper
book
 has rooted down its root which is quite not possible to
rootout
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root out
.
This
 essay will explain both the views of in
up coming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
upcoming paragraphs
. In
this
 modern world the e-
book
 has become very popular and won the heart of millions of
reader
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readers
.
This
book
provide
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provides
 all the facilities that the reader
are looking
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is looking
 for and ease the
boredome
an onerous or difficult concern
burden
 of the human thoughts. E-
book
 are
comfot
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comfortable
comfort
comfy
comforted
comforts
 to carry wherever one would like to carry. It has
also
 very large capacity to
hlod
keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
hold
 the materials inside the small chips.
This
 is how the digital
book
 over took
at
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on
present form
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the present form
 of
book
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the book
a book
.
Papaer
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A paper book is
Paper book are
Paper book is
Papaer book is
book
 are one of the best form that has
coem
move toward, travel toward something or somebody or approach something or somebody
come
 all the ways
from
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for
 centuries and billions of recorded history and
documentents
writing that provides information (especially information of an official nature)
documents
 were
writtin
set down in writing in any of various ways
written
 and preserved. The history of paper
book
 is back to the ages and help the countries to make the important
book
 keeping for the need
of
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for
 the
informtion
a message received and understood
information
 and art.
Im
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I was
I'm
 my opinion paper
book
 will never fade away, no matter how the world change in technologies and its
preferances
a strong liking
preferences
. The
book
are
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is
important form
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an important form
 of records and learning
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 to all humankind and to trace the information from ages to age yet to come.

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