The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The presented maps illustrate the planned development for the
center
of a small town called Islip.
It can be seen that major changes are planned to be made Change the spelling
centre
such
as creating pedestrians road only and the building of
new housing.
The shops in the north of Islip will be replaced by a shopping Change preposition
apply
center
in the middle and on its Change the spelling
centre
right
there will be a Add a comma
,right
carpark
Correct your spelling
car park
while
a bus station on the left. Apparently, no changes are planned for the shops in the middle of Islip town center
.
The main road is going to be for pedestrians only and a dual carriageway will be built around the city. New housing areas are going to emerge in the Change the spelling
centre
north east
and the Correct your spelling
northeast
south east
of the town. The park area is going to be decreased in order to allow Correct your spelling
southeast
a
space Correct article usage
apply
to
the new housing Change preposition
for
while
the school is going to be expanded slightly.Submitted by rwan.najjar on
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