The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The presented maps illustrate the planned development for the
center
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of a small town called Islip. It can be seen that major changes are planned to be made
such
as creating pedestrians road only and the building
of
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new housing. The shops in the north of Islip will be replaced by a shopping
center
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in the middle and on its
right
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there will be a
carpark
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car park
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a bus station on the left. Apparently, no changes are planned for the shops in the middle of Islip town
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. The main road is going to be for pedestrians only and a dual carriageway will be built around the city. New housing areas are going to emerge in the
north east
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and the
south east
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of the town. The park area is going to be decreased in order to allow
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the new housing
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the school is going to be expanded slightly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Small town
  • Centre
  • Development
  • Maps
  • Plans
  • Introduce
  • Topic
  • Purpose
  • Essay
  • Description
  • Current
  • Key features
  • Facilities
  • Advantages
  • Positive aspects
  • Benefits
  • Proposed
  • Changes
  • Improvements
  • Suggested
  • Potential
  • Course of action
  • Summarize
  • Opinion
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