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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in cinemas. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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According to some, the need to go to the cinema doesn’t arise these days, as they can be seen on
phone
Suggestion
the phone
 or tablets, while others say that, movies must be watched in
theaters
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
theatres
 to have full enjoyment. In my opinion, though films can be watched anytime on phones or
tablets but
Accept comma addition
tablets, but
 the real
experience
 of films happens only in the cinema halls. Due the technological advancements, the movies can be seen anytime on our handy electronic gadgets.
For instance
, the films can be seen during travel, I was recently travelling to Delhi and the most awaited film got released on the same day, so I chose to watch on
phone
Suggestion
the phone
a phone
 during the flight.
This
 made me to utilize the time effectively. The best way to have the real time
experience
 of the film is to watch it in cinemas.
Firstly
, the sound system will be of
best quality
Suggestion
the best quality
 so that we don’t miss the minutest sound.
Secondly
, the big screens provide minute details of the scenes and
thirdly
 cinemas have multiple dimension
experience
 facilities. The combined effect of all above will give immense pleasure to watch the film, in doing so we remember the movie for longer time. In conclusion,
although
 in spare times the films can be seen on gadgets, but in my opinion, they have to be watched in
theaters
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
theatres
 to have
memorable
Suggestion
a memorable experience
memorable experiences
experience
.

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