School teaching should focus on success on the workforce and less attention should be given to academic achievement , to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Preparing for the workplace is crucial for every individual and every

instituiton

an organization founded and united for a specific purpose

institution

plays a major role in

shapening

any process serving to define the shape of something

shaping

each and every

students

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student

. A few number of

individual

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individuals

are of the perception that little significance should be placed on academic success

,

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,

while a larger number are of the opinion that more emphasis should be on getting set for the

work

environment. Personally, being ready for the

work place

a place where work is done

workplace

is a skill one should be able to acquire while in school, as much as one strives to attain academic excellence.

Nevertheless

,

none

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no-one

should take

prioroty

status established in order of importance or urgency

priority

over the other. Unfortunately, quite a number of people aren't ready for

the

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the workforce, both

workforce

both emotionally and physically, which eventually affects their performances at the initial stage of their careers.

Firstly

, thriving within the

workforce

it is crucial you have some basic soft skills

such

as collaboration and

team

cooperative work done by a team (especially when it is effective)

teamwork

work

, problem solving and critical thinking, and interpersonal communication.

However

, as a newbie within the

workforce

, possessing the

aformentioned

being the one previously mentioned or spoken of

aforementioned

soft skills might be difficult due to

fact

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the fact

more emphasis within the learning environment is focused on the technical skills.

For instance

, a young graduate who has just finished university, and got her

first

job is in a conference room having a presentation and along the line had some technical issues with her projector, someone who has been trained for the

work place

a place where work is done

workplace

will wear the hat of a problem solver and try to find a way around and still presenting her slides rather than fidgeting.

Secondly

, academic achievement is

also

super important for the

workforce

and shouldn't be

neglected but

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neglected, but

lately technical skills are becoming more important to employers than having good grades. Prior to now, parents were entirely focused on a child's grade due to the significance placed on it. Personally, attention should be on both- academic success and preparing for the

workforce

.