In many contries, shopping onlines is replacing shopping at stores. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

Nowadays, in many nations, online shopping has

gain

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gained

popularity and

overweighed

usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it

overweight

tranditional

consisting of or derived from tradition

traditional

shopping.

This

essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of

this

trend It is very obvious that shopping online has undeniable benefits.

Firstly

, shopping online provides a convenient way of buying goods.

Instead

of wasting time standing in a store as before, people

are more prefer

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are more preferring

are more preferred

to

saving

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save

their time by searching and clicking

in

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on

the products on the websites, whether they are at home or at work, or even in the street, as long as they have internet connected and be able to receive products shipped.

Secondly

, online shopping offers a larger

quantities

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quantity

of products compared with shopping at stores. Not always the store can provide

sufficent

of a quantity that can fulfill a need or requirement but without being abundant

sufficient

significant

items, but online stores always display the items and customers only have to put it in the cart, which is way more convenient.

Lastly

, online shopping provides jobs for unemployeds. Shipping is a great job with low risks and medium incomes. Despite of the advantages of online shopping, there are still a great deal of disadvantages.

Firstly

, safety is the biggest concern of the customers. Purchasing something online

requiring

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is requiring

persional

concerning or affecting a particular person or his or her private life and personality

personal

personnel

datas

a collection of facts from which conclusions may be drawn

data

details

such

as full name, date of birth and credit card numbers. Bad people can take advantage on

this

and do harm to the customers.

In addition

, online stores basically can exaggerate the products without committing to any crimes. Whereas

tranditional

consisting of or derived from tradition

traditional

stores, products are displayed in front of the buyers, for they can touch it. And there is no way for

ther

of them or themselves

their

there

the

seller to exaggerate it. Another issue of buying

stuffs

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stuff

online is shipment costs. Sometimes, shipment costs half of

product's value

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a product's value

the product's value

and many customers are dissatisfied with

this

as they have to purchase more money and some can mot afford it. In conclusion,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

think the advantages of shopping online has overweigh the disadvantages,

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

in the new digital world,

therefore

lead to the

reducement

of brick and mortal stores.