You went to the local hospital’s Emergency Department with your young child who had severe stomach pains. You had to wait for almost four hours before your daughter was treated by a doctor and, while you were waiting, you were constantly ignored by the other staff. Write a letter to the Registrar, about the service you received.
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Dear Registrar,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction regarding I went to the local hospital's Emergency Department with my young child who had severe stomach pains and to bring to your attention the concerns I have encountered formally. I believe it is important to address
this
matter
promptly to resolve.
On Saturday, I serviced from your hospital. Unfortunately, my experience was far from satisfactory. I had to wait for almost four hours before my daughter was treated by a doctor and, while
I was waiting, I was constantly ignored by the other staff. This
issue has had a significant impact on me, causing inconvenience and distress. I expected better from your department, and the current situation does not meet the standards of quality and service that I have come to associate with your brand.
I want to complain about what happened. I believe that a fair resolution to this
matter
would be satisfying my needs. I trust that your hospital values its customers and is committed to providing excellent service. I expect this
matter
to be addressed promptly and resolved to my satisfaction.
Thank you for your prompt attention to this
issue. I believe that, with your cooperation, we can resolve this
matter
amicably.
Yours faithfully,
Mirsaid.Submitted by Teo Halimov on
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Clarify your specific request for how you would like this matter to be resolved, as this makes your letter more complete.
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The greeting and closing are both polite and appropriately structured, creating a professional tone.
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The writing tone is suitable and conveys the writer's dissatisfaction while maintaining politeness.