Some people believe that studying abroad is important because it expands a person’s knowledge and understanding of the world. Others feel that it is better to study at home because that is the best way to prepare for a career in the student’s own country. Discuss both views, and give your opinion

More emphasis is put these days on education. While some argue that studying in your
country
is the perfect
way
to prepare for your career, others argue and I agree, that studying in a foreign
country
broadens your mind and opens your eyes to new practices. s
tudying
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Studying
abroad is the best
way
to build your career and be subjected to a new i
deas.
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idea
Information is written in books and you can get that while you are at home
,
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,
but studying in a foreign
country
gets you knowledge no book will ever get you. Not only will you get experience, but
also
you will learn a new culture and a whole different system of studying than the one you can get in your local university.
For instance
, Saudi Arabia has been sending their medical students to Canada and the United States to study there and their medical systems had benefited a lot.
On the other hand
spending several years outside your might make you less prepared for getting a
job
when you get back home. One reason is that not all universities worldwide a
re accredited
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is accredited
and some institutes might not accept it.
S
econd reason
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The second reason
is that you might not know the requirements that are needed to f
ulfill
put in effect
fulfil
the post and
thus
making it difficult to acquire a
job
in your own
country
.
For i
nstance all
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instance, all
Egyptian students who studied in Sweden couldn’t find a
job
as their certificate w
here
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were
not accredited by the ministry of higher education and they had to e
nroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
t
o
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in
universities in Egypt. I strongly recommend studying abroad as it opens your eyes to a new w
orld
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world, however
however
, I suggest doing a thorough research o
f
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on
about
the
country
and the university you are going to study in and matching
this
data with
job
markets in your own
country
. In conclusion,
although
s
tudying
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studies
abroad might make preparation for a career at home harder students should do it as it is a great
way
to gain experience and a
way
to understand how the world works.

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