23. Should education and health care be free of charge and funded by governments or should it be responsible of the people for these service. Discuss with the example.

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are two elements for the local citizens in societies and the charge to assess them varies in terms of local governments. Some people advocate that governments should be responsible for funding them completely; while, others insist that it is people's personal responsibility. The essay will discuss both views and presents my personal opinion as well.
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with, universal
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and
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coverage will enhance l
ocal residents' happiness
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the local residents' happiness
for which they are more  willing to contribute themselves to their nations.  
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, nations will become more powerful and competitive because of their strong and well-educated citizens.
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, Bhutan is one of small Asian countries with free access to these two services since its beginning for which it has become one of the countries with highest National Happiness Index and strongest military force. Free access to
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and
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provide a harmonious environment for residents to grow and raise their families.
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, no charge of
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will
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bring some drawbacks to the nations as well. The
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one is that it might cause to abuse the services if residents and professionals who are in charge of the services do not follow strict guidelines.
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, universal services will lead to burdens for governments' budgets. In addiction, the efficiency of the
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system and motivation of
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might be diminished.
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, in Canada, universal
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service leads to longest waiting time for seeing specialists or operating.  In conclusion, free
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and
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coverage will bring either benefits or drawbacks listed above. It definitely makes ordinary residents happy and less stressful by eliminating the financial burden of medical bills and
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tuition.
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, in order to maintain these two services's qualities, clients should have access to them properly or they will collapses and local citizens will suffer.
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